“Breathe” (Lyrics in progress)

I’ve been writing on those lyrics, but i’m not satisfied yet especially on the second part about the end. I hav to change some stuff, cause there it doesn’t match the content, i wanted to give to it, i was more lookin for that it rhymes, then that the contents right.

“Breathe” (Lyrics in progress)

Verse 1:
Again here we are, we both know
This won’t go far, gotta stop that show
I thought this time, we would know
So here we are, where we go?

Let’s just blast from the first to the last
Get that shit out of our chest
Dam u can’t dodge that friggn blast
We won’t stay calm and pretend to rest

Enough is enough forget the past
All this shit we won’t let it last
Forever, in our mind we grind our teeth
And we unwind whats underneath
Just breath calm down just breath

One paranoia but two sides
The dark and the light
One sparks in the night
But beware of the others blight

Verse 2:
Once again we stand in the first row
Ready to fight ready to let it go
Nothing gonna stop us, oh no
Long enough we kept our voice low

Long enough we kept ouselves quiet
Believed u kept us calm we tried
our patience upon your lies Died
Gather together and lets riot

“You mustn’t this you mustn’t that”
chop off the young mans head
The laws are made against us
fight on our own  at any cost
We have to riot   we must

One law but two sides
The dark and the light
One saves the poor mans night
But beware it’s not always right

copyright: todraw aka Shikim


5 Responses to ““Breathe” (Lyrics in progress)”

  1. snow ashes Says:

    WoW damn that was so good man i like’t it’s so good really good 🙂

  2. unbreakable^^ Says:

    yeah man really great,,I like it so much,,u used beautiful words to discribe it,,keep working shikim,,all my best wishes to you,,<3

  3. Shireen Says:

    hi buddy! even if I’m not so often on msn I don’t forget you!exams will be soon over so I’ll breathe a little! talking about Breathe…I do like it a lot! compliments friend..a lot :3

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